A New Beginning - Comments

Murdering me? I'm dead. Update soon? I love this!

Lol! Nice fumble.

Please add more soon!!! I'm dying for more! OwO

This is awesome! Keep writing, I love it! :D

It's looking good. Please continue!
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@PandaCombustion It's fine, the amount of times I've done it is embarrassing xD You don't really notice until you've re-read it a couple of times ^.^

@AvengingThatAssbutt
Yeah, I know. I'm really sorry about that. This is my first story, and it's a bit tricky for me, but I fixed it just now! I think. o.o Haha, thank you for the suggestion!!! ^-^ And thanks for reading.

The story is really good, I like it! However, there's just one thing; you keep switching between tenses, which can get a little confusing. Other than that, I really like it! :)

This is awesome keep going!