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@fraychan
Then I have done my job well. :p

Yasumi Yasumi
6/15/15

Your cliff hangers wound me D:

fraychan fraychan
6/12/15

@fraychan
Keep that adrenaline pumping, still a lot to come.

Yasumi Yasumi
5/14/15

Oh god I can't even describe how happy this chapter made me. I'm feeling a slight adrenaline rush haha

fraychan fraychan
5/12/15

@fraychan
I agree, things have could been so much different if things had just come to light sooner.

Yasumi Yasumi
5/7/15

Yeah I suppose thats true. It tends to be a pattern that people in high power have trouble balancing that with family, whether they show it or not. He may have done the best he could but it still could have been way better. "you're both meant to be king but only one of you will" really bothers me. Why not tell loki he is meant for his own task that will be great in its own right? Would have prevented alot of issues.

fraychan fraychan
5/5/15

@fraychan
Odin was not pleasing in the movies, but even less so in the comics. I'd actually rather him in the movies. But then again, Thor was a bit of an ass in the comics as well, but so too was Loki.
I didn't want Odin to be the complete ass in this story. I feel like he wasn't the best parent, but he also wasn't the worst.

Yasumi Yasumi
5/4/15

The creators of the movie said they needed a way to make loki see the damage his actions can/had caused and for it to be a uniting force between him and Thor. I mean, as far as plot goes, it was a good move, but that doesn't make it any less depressing. And god dont even get me started on Odin ugh he needs a good smack upside the head

fraychan fraychan
5/1/15

@fraychan
Me too. I hated that she died, why couldn't it have been Odin. :/

Yasumi Yasumi
4/28/15

UGGHHHHH I dont care that I know its going to happen. Frigga dying always kills me D':

fraychan fraychan
4/24/15

@fraychan

Your compliments make me so happy!
I never intended for this fic to end up so long, but I wouldn't change a thing.
Thank you for your lovely comments, and I hope you enjoy this to the end. Still not close to done, but nearing the end of a few plot lines at least. :P
I hope, when the time comes, that my original novels can be praised in the same manner.
I feel that my writing has improved over the last 2 years and I learn new things everyday. It's been an absolute joy to travel this path with all my readers. :D

Thank you

Yasumi Yasumi
4/13/15

I've been reading fanfics for over 8 years and this is one of the best I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It is very well written and the storyline is so compelling. I honestly never want it to end haha

fraychan fraychan
4/13/15

@GallifreyanLoki
Omg thank you so much for the compliment!
I hope that as we get closer to the end you remain enjoying every moment :)

Yasumi Yasumi
4/13/15

This is seriously one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, I can not wait to see what happens!

@nitacruise
I'm so glad! Wahoo!,!

Yasumi Yasumi
3/6/15

I loved it!!

nitacruise nitacruise
3/4/15

@Cjheart85
Thanks! So glad you're enjoying it!
Updates are Monday and Thursdays .
when I began writing this I wanted it to be long and intricate with lots of tiny subplots and tie ins. :)

Yasumi Yasumi
1/15/15

Awesome story!! Really loving it. Seems so real in a fantasy way. Can't wait for the next update :D

Cjheart85 Cjheart85
1/9/15

Awesome story!! Really loving it. Seems so real in a fantasy way. Can't wait for the next update :D

Cjheart85 Cjheart85
1/9/15

@ashes
My Christmas was awesome and I hope yours was too!
I'm happy you've caught up and that I haven't disappointed!
I hope it stays that way ;)

Yasumi Yasumi
12/29/14