Moving In (One-shot) - Comments

@On Your Left
This was a really good story. And I love your username. :)

This is such a cute story!!
I loved it! great writing, and just an AMAZING job!

@On Your Left
Yeeeep.

@Spider-Man

Thanks! I am so glad you liked it XD Although you probably won't think that about Tony when the Marvel Civil War movie rolls around...

Tony! What a kind man!


and what a heartwarming story!

@Spider-Man

Haha, who are you referring to? :)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW......THAT IS SO KIND OF HIM! He's the best friend in the WHOLE world!

Cool would love to see pepper's reaction

@Elwyn

Hey, thanks for checking it out! Yeah, I'm trying to get more recognition for this, I'm glad you liked it :D

This is an interesting take. I like the atmosphere, although I don't care much for the present tense. All in all, nicely done. It's a pity this fanfiction doesn't get more recognition.