Liberty for all
Liberty for all
I was walking around in the shop so nervous. I was sweating so much it probably looked like I had just run a marathon! He was over there! Captain America was over there just casually drinking coffee with his friend. I think he called him Sam. I went on my phone and hacked into the child services files and deleted mine. I'm off their grid hopefully for now. I know a good spot downtown ill be able to blend in. I go outside and walk there. I sit down a brown headed girl sits next to me. She says," Hi," I say ," hi" then she pulls out a badge and says," I need you to come with me." I get up and run I go into an ally and start climbing up the latter. She's following me fast! I keep climbing and I get to the top of the building and start running. I realize I'm going to need to jump to the next one. I take a deep breath and jump and immediately start running. She catches up to me and knocks me down. I kick her and she falls down and then I puch her. Then she shoots something at me and the world turns dark.
Notes
I really want know if you guys like it!!!:) or have any suggestions this is my first story
@Liberty49
I think that that is going to be a great idea. Maybe you could go more into her character. Also definitely be descriptive, try and make people feel like they are actually there. If you want I can message you later?
1/21/15