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thor's girl.

the past.

Loki's pov.
( little children.)
" Hello prince Loki." Someone whispered in my ear." T-Thalia what are you doing in the library." I asked. She never came here she's normally with sif and Thor." I wanted to see you." She said and I smiled. I looked at the black dress she was wearing it was tight around her chest but lose from her hips down and it looked good on her." O-okay." I stuttered. This girl stole my heart and has it in her hands." So how have you you been." She asked and sat next to me." I I've been good." I said and she smiled." Good to know my prince." She said and I smiled." Thalia where are you!" Sif shouted." I better go. Goodbye my prince." She planted a small kiss on my lips and skipped out of the room.( 15 year olds.)." Thalia may I speak with you." I asked. I decided to tell her how I feel." Sure what's wrong Loki." She asked. Cant do it." I just wanted to say you look absolutely gorgeous today." I said and she giggled." Well if you're not busy maybe we could go for a walk." She said and I nodded. But then sif came over." Thalia Thor wants to tell you something." Sif said and Thalia smiled but planted a small kiss on my cheek before running off with her sister." Loki have you got a crush on lady Thalia." Mother asked." No what makes you think that." I said and she smiled." Oh hey Thalia." Mother said and I turned to no one." Aww its okay I wont tell her." mother said before walking away." Loki!" Thalia shouted happily running to me." Hello lady Thalia." I said controlling my nerves for once." So what was it Thor wanted to talk about." I asked and she smiled." He wanted to talk about battle strategies." She said." But I said me and you are going for a walk." She finished and I smiled." That's nice." I said. Yes she wants to walk with me." Loki can I ask you something." She asked as we reached a Clearing in the woods." What would happen when I turn sixteen I'm kind of scared." She said and I smiled." As am I but you've got to think when I turn sixteen I get the gift of almost immortality." I said and she wrapped her arms around me." Thank you Loki." She whispered and I smiled and hugged her back. She pulled away and looked me in the eyes before leaning In and kissing me passionately. She broke the kiss and I smiled." You're an amazing person even if people may say other wise." She said." We better head back." I said but I didn't want to. I wanted to stay and kiss her. But we stood up and walked to the palace." Thalia what was that kiss supposed to mean." I asked." It meant thank you for always being there for me." She said and I frowned abit." Are you okay Loki." She asked." Just thinking." I said." You seem to think alot do you want to talk about it." She asked." No its okay." I said and she smiled. Oh how I wish to love every bit of her." Loki I think I love Thor." She said." What." I asked and she nodded." I just feel connected to him." She said.( after the banishment.)." Thalia Maxwell I'm here on behalf of shield." Curse that stupid black widow." What am I needed for am I in trouble." Thalia asked looking scared." Nick wants you to be an agent even though he knows nothing of your back round." Widow said." Neither do I." Thalia said." Please come this way." Widow said and Thalia followed her." Ah miss Maxwell I want you to be an agent." Nick said." And what if I say no." Thalia asked." Then we let you go." Nick said. Yes Thalia say no." I think I'll be an agent." She said and nick smiled. Tony stark started walking towards nick when he looked at her he nearly fainted. Back off she's mine." Ah Mr Stark meet Thalia a new agent of mine." Nick said." Hello Tony stark its nice to meet you hows pepper." Thalia asked. Shit she still has her powers." How did you know that." Tony asked." I read your file." Thalia said." Tony will you show her around." Nick asked. No not him anyone but him." It would be my pleasure." Tony said and showed Thalia around the hellicarrier. All the male agents on the ship seemed to like her but she didn't notice she didn't even notice tony liking her. I shape shifted into an agent and walked over to them." Thalia Maxwell pleased to meet you." I said and held out my hand. She shook it. Oh how she smelt of vanilla." Stark you're wanted in a meeting I'll show Thalia around." I said and he walked away groaning." Thanks for saving me from him he talks about himself alot." She giggled. " You're very cute." I said and she smiled." You're quite handsome." She said and smiled as we leaned closer." Ummm hey." Someone said and we went back to normal without kissing fuck you captain." Miss Maxwell you're wanted." He said and looked at her with love and desire." Well goodbye." She said and kissed me on the cheek before walking away with Steve. I turned invisible and followed them she didn't even speak once." Miss Maxwell Nat is going to train you in martial arts." Steve said and she nodded. We got in the training room and she got in the ring. Nat threw a punch and she caught it and twisted it before throwing her over her shoulder and pinning her to the floor. Everyone was shocked even Thalia." How the hell did you do that." Tony asked." I don't know." She said helping Nat up." No one can beat me." She said and Steve got in the ring." I'm going to go easy on you okay." He said and she frowned." I get it cos I'm a girl." Thalia said and I heard Nat chuckle. He swiped for her feet but she front flipped and kicked him in the face." Holy shit she's a ninja." Tony said and no one laughed." Okay when Thor gets here they can spar." Nick said." Who's Thor." She asked." Another avenger he's not from here." Nick said." He's from asgard and brothers with Loki the one who attacked earth and failed miserably." Thalia said." How the hell." Nat asked." I read his file." She said and helped Steve up." Did she break your nose." Bruce asked." I am so sorry I didnt mean to." She said and he chuckled." Its okay. Got a kick though." He said and she smiled." Clint why don't you have a go." Nat asked and he climbed in the ring after Steve left it. He ran at her and she punched him in the throat." Oh shit is he okay." Nat asked." Yeah it'll take a minute until he's back to normal." She said.

Tony's pov.
I started thinking back to when Thalia was just an agent.
(2 years ago.)
I needed to talk to nick when I saw her the girl from my dreams. Blue hair and red eyes. She wore black jeans, a tight vest top and combat boots." Tony I need you to show her around the hellicarrier." Nick said my heart stopped." It would be my pleasure." I said and she smiled at me. I showed her round talking about my suits and stuff but she never spoke then an agent walked over to us." Stark you're needed in a meeting but I can show her round." Fuck you." I whispered as I walked away." Stark pleased you could join us." Nick said." Lets get this over with I need to make a suit." I said and the meeting started." We have a new agent a Miss Thalia Maxwell. She need training I want you all in the training room Steve go get her." Nick said and I cursed before walking into the training room. She walked in and didnt speak at all." Miss Maxwell Nat's going to train you in martial arts." Steve said and she got in the ring with Nat. Nat threw a punch Thalia caught it and twisted it before throwing Nat over her shoulder and pinning her to the floor." How the hell did you do that." I asked everyone was shocked even her." I don't know." She said and helped Nat up who smiled at nick." Okay I'm going to go easy on you." Steve said and got in the ring." I get it cos I'm a girl." She said and Nat chuckled. He smiled for her feet but she flipped and kicked him in the face breaking his nose." Holy shit she's a ninja." I said but no one laughed." Okay when Thor gets here they can spar." Nick said." Who's Thor." She asked." Another avenger he's not from here." Nick said." He's from asgard and brothers with Loki the one who attacked earth and failed miserably." She said." How the hell." Nat asked." I read his file." Thalia said and helped Steve up. I tuned out I was just wrapped up in how gorgeous she was. Why do I have to be with pepper. I was Clint get in the ring and he ran at her and she punched him in the throat. I smiled. She never really talked she became a field agent and I never got to talk to her when she was here because she was always training. I was on the treadmill once and all I heard where Lou smack louder than Steve's. I turned around and she kicked it into the wall making it crack." Damn girl." I said and she just hung a new bag up. She carried on punching when fire shot out off her hands and the bag exploded. A flame started on the floor and she looked scared." Water." She said and water appeared in a ball on her hand. She threw I at the fire extinguishing it. She ran out of the room and got to the deck. She made a cloud and flew away on it. She looked like she was surfing." She's mine back off." Something whispered in my ear. I turned around and no one was there. I ran to the control room and saw nick talking the Steve." Nick check the footage of the training room." I said an he did." Woah." Steve said and I smiled." Where is agent Maxwell." Nick asked." She flew away on a cloud." I said and Steve looked at me like I was stupid." Check the footage of the deck." I said and it showed her floating on a cloud." Get her in I need to talk to her." Nick said. Nat pulled out her phone and rang her." Thalia calm down we just want to talk." She said and pulled the phone away from her ear." She hung up." Nat said and put her phone away." I'll go." I said and put my suit on. I flew to her apartment and knocked on." Thalia please I know you're in there people are asking where you've been they say have courage and I'm trying to just wanna talk to you please just let me in." I sang ( frozen end of do you wanna build a snowman.). I heard her giggling and the door opened." You suck at singing you know that don't you." She said and I
smiled." You look like you need a drink." I said and we went to a bar." Hoe did you know frozen was one of my favourite films." She asked." Nat told me." I said and she smiled.( a couple drinks later. Well about twenty shots later .)" I know what your super hero name would be. You would be fire girl." I said and she laughed cutest laugh ever." I was thinking cloud rider." She said and I laughed." That's actually a good idea." I said and she smiled." Can I tell you a secret." She asked." Yes ." I said." I have the power of mind control." She whispered and I smiled. She leaned forward and we kissed. I pulled away and she smiled." Are you drunk." I asked " little bit." She said and I smiled." Me too." I said and she made a cloud and we went back to the hellicarrier." Tony you got her drunk.!?" Nat shouted Thalia fainted and Steve caught her before she hit the floor." I swear to god stark." Nat said and pulled me to th training room and broke my nose." Why did you get her drunk." She asked." Because she was upset and needed cheering up." I said receiving another punch." No I have a feeling you got her drunk so she'd sleep with you." Nat said." Okay maybe but -" she cut me off by kicking me in the face." One you have a girlfriend and two you took advantage of her." She growled and left the room. I got up and went to see Thalia who was in the medical bay." Is she okay." I asked Bruce." She's stable but having a nightmare or something. When Steve brought her she was having an attack if some kind." He answered. I stroked her face and she moved away then shot awake." What happened why do i have a banging headache." She asked.

Thalia's pov.
i was thinking back to my agent years and I'm gonna start when i woke up in a hospital bed." What happened why do i have a banging headache." I asked and tony and Bruce looked at me shocked." She speaks." Bruce said. I stood up and went to my room after bumping into an agent." I'm so sorry i was lost in my thoughts." I said and he helped me up." It's fine i wasn't watching were i was going either.so its kind of both of our faults." He said." Wait I know you. You're the one who showed me round." I said and he smiled." Thalia right?" He asked." Yeah. I'm Luke." He said." I need to change but I'll see you round." I said and kissed him on the cheek. I got to my room and changed into black leather shorts and a sleeping with sirens top. I'm sticking with my boots. I went to the bridge and saw nick there." Agent Maxwell I want to make you an avenger saying your amazing martial arts and special talents." He said." Okay sure." I said ." But don't expect me to talk more." I said and he nodded." I'll be on the deck meditating." I said and got on the deck. I made and cloud and floated up before meditating." Thalia get down here." Nat shouted. The cloud dropped to the floor and I floated up to eye level." Sup spideyass." I asked and she laughed." Thor wont be here for another year but you have to stay and be an avenger." She said." Okay." I said and she played with my cloud." Here." I said and made one for her a cloud. She floated up and controlled it. We flew around the world then went to bed because it was night but I made a cloud and slept on that. I felt someone watching me some I made another cloud that covered me so no one could see me." Ah my dear Thalia sleep well I love you." I heard someone say. I opened my eyes and there was no one there." Okay ." I said and went to sleep." Thalia wake up time to train." Nay shouted. I pulled on some blue shorts and a green tank top then pulled my boots on before walking with Nat to the training room." Thalia or cloud rider." Nick asked." What." I asked." Everyone needs a super hero name and yours is cloud rider." Nick said." Cool." I said and made a cloud. I sat on it and nick made us fight in our suits he made me go in what I was wearing mind you I did win everyone and even the full team. Then I was on the deck and they said the hulk was out. He crashed on to the deck and looked like he was going to attack me." Hey hulk." I said and saw Luke who was telling me to run." Hulk smash." Bruce roared." You wanna smash things go ahead but you're just making trouble for your self now let Bruce out and we can talk." I said and he looked like he was arguing with me but calmly." I said let Bruce out do not make ne hurt you." I said an she shrunk into Bruce. I covered him with a cloud and told Luke to get him some clothes." Thalia omg how did you get Bruce out." Clint asked running to me." I shouted at him." I said and he hugged me." You okay." He asked." I'm fine." I said and Luke came back with clothes for Bruce." Thalia can I talk to you." Luke asked." Sure what's up." I asked walking away from Clint and Bruce." I was wondering if you wanted to get coffee sometime." He asked." Sure why not." I said and he smiled." How bout now?" I asked and he nodded. We had to go to the cafeteria because nick wouldn't let me leave the ship and I was actually fun." No way you broke the captain's nose." he said." I did I kicked him in the face and I broke." I said and he smiled." Well you are a remarkable girl." He said and we ended up kissing.

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Comments

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.