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thor's girl.

wedding.

I smiled thinking about how tomorrow I would marry the love of my immortal life." That sounds amazing." I said and Thor kissed me." Why do I always end up seeing it." Sif asked and I looked at her." Because you're the goddess of awkward moments." I said and she smiled." I'm starting to think I am." She said and Loki walked in." Well I am never going to turn dragon on that training field again." I said and everyone except me and Thor gasped." You're a dragon." Sif asked." No I have a dragon form." I said and she smiled." Okay saying the weddings tomorrow you have to sleep in different rooms." She said and I frowned." But nightmares." I said and she smiled." You child. I'll be there I know I'm not Thor but maybe I'll keep them away maybe you just need someone who loves you there." She said and I smiled." Would you like to go for a walk." Thor asked and I nodded. We walked through the palace gardens and he offered me and apple.
flash back.
He climbed a tree and picked me an apple." For you my dear." He said and I went to take it when he took a bite." Hey that wasn't very nice." I said and he smiled. He dropped the apple and I chased him around the gardens until I caught him. He picked me a red rose and handed it to me." Oh wow it's gorgeous." I said and he smiled." No Thor no." I said and tried to run but his picked me up and spun me round. A cloud appeared above us and snowed on us." Ha that's what you get." I said." Woah look at that." He said and stood me up before running into the maze." Thor." I said and walked inside. It didn't help that it was night and I was a ten year old in a dress with no weapons or armour on. In a world where monsters and other things roam free." Thor." I said again and I heard a growl." Thor this isn't funny." I said and a shadow hound ( werewolf type dog that's more viscous.) walked towards me. I stepped back and kept moving backwards but I tripped and started pushing myself back." Thor help." I said and backed into a wall. It got so close to me and I put my head in the wall and closed my eyes." Thalia where the- holy Odin." He said and I squealed hearing the hound growl. It stopped and I looked at Thor who had scared the monster away." Thalia are you okay did it hurt you." He asked and helped me up." Thank you so much I was so scared you just saved me." I said and hugged him." Its okay come on we had better be heading back." He said and picked me up." What were you doing." I asked and he smiled." I was following a small bird." He said and i smiled " thank you Thor." I said and he placed me Down at the palace doors." Can I just do one thing." I asked and he nodded. I leaned towards him and kissed him." Thalia Thor where are you." Frigga asked and I broke the kiss. I wasn't stupid i knew he liked me in that way and he made it more obvious when he kissed me again.
end of flashback.
" I know that trick." I said and took the apple." Damn cant even trick you once." He said and I smiled." Well my prince lead the way through the maze." I said and he smiled.

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Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.