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thor's girl.

the funeral.

Today is the day I don't want to leave my bed. I don't want her to be dead. I want her to be in my arms. I want her back." Thor its time." Sif said. Her face was red and puffy. She wore a black dress and her hair was pulled back. I stood up in my armour and picked up storm." Come on I know I don't want to go either but we have to." I said and she curled up in my arms. I walked to the pier place where we sent the dead into the spirit world. She was lay in her boat and her staff was in her right hand." Thor I know its hard but we'll get through this." Sif said. They sent her boat out and then sent the arrow. My head dropped. I looked at the boat one last time but I couldn't see her. I heard something behind me and I turned to see two raven wings. I followed them to blue hair and pale skin. Storm jumped out of my arms and into hers and licked her face." Okay okay storm." She Sai and I ran to her and wrapped my arms around her." I missed you." I said and she put storm down but she just sat next to Thalia." I love you Thor." She said and I smiled." I love you more." I said." Hey doesn't your sister get a hug." Sif asked and she let go of me and hugged her sister." Never do that again." she said and I smiled." Hey I temporarily died." Thalia said and sif chuckled." The fire woke me. It always was my favourite element." She said and hugged me again." Were you really going to cremate me." She asked and I held her tighter." I thought I'd lost you." I said." Cant get rid of me that easy." She said and I smiled.

Thalia's pov.
he smiled against me and I heard a dragon roar. I turned around and saw an army of them at the edge of the forest." One moment." I said and flew to them. They all bowed and I turned dragon." Nice to see you again queen Thalia." Spirit said." Nice to see you too." I said and he landed on my shoulder." I cant believe my sister's a dragon." Sif said and I lay in front of them like a puppy. Thor stroked me and so did the rest of the people there." Hey step daughter." Frigga said and I turned human in my armour and hugged her." Hello." I said and she hugged me back." Okay so dragon form new princess of asgard anything else we should know." Someone said and I turned to see Loki. I looked at Thor who was ready to attack Loki but I ran to him and put my hand on his chest." Let me talk to him." I said and he growled but nodded. I walked over to Loki who smiled." So you're alive." He said." No then asshole." I said and he smiled when I stopped in front of him." I feel like I owe you something." I said and punched him in the face breaking his jaw. I heard Thor chuckle and I walked back over to him." Now that was amazing." He said and kissed me." Everytime." Sif said and I chuckled.

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Comments

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.