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thor's girl.

really?

I was sat on my balcony when Thor came outside with Storm." hey why aren't you asleep." he asked." I couldn't sleep." I said and he kissed me." but I have something we could do to make us a bit tired." I said and kissed him. ( I apologise but skip.). We lay there naked." so how are you." he asked." I'm great." I said and he smiled." glad I could make you happy." he said and I smiled. my bed was comfy and I pulled a blanket over us so if someone walked in they wouldn't see us both naked. the door opened revealing tony and I hid behind thor." I am so sorry." he said and left. I stood up and fire spiralled around me changing me into a short red dress." so I guess we better talk to him." I said and we walked into the main room." I really should get him so asgardian alcohol he'll love it." I said and tony looked at us and his jaw dropped. my dress was tight and strapless and ended mid thigh. I transformed into my armour and his jaw was still dropped." so asgardian alcohol what's it like." he asked and me and Thor both laughed." you wont be able to take it no mortal can consume it without seeing fairies." I said and he looked hurt." let me try it." he said and I conjured a glass of it." Thalia are you sure he can take it." thor asked and I looked at the now empty glass and tony who was dancing around holding a bottle of beer." I'll heal him." I said and healed tony so he was normal. I started feeling sick so I ran to the bathroom and ended up throwing up." Thalia are you okay." thor asked and I nodded." I'm great but can I think we should head back to asgard soon." I said and later that day we went home with storm. I got to the healers and found out something I was hoping wasn't true. I'm pregnant. now to tell thor. we were walking around the gardens wen I looked at him." Thor I need to tell you something." I said and he looked at me worried." what is it." he asked sounding worried." I'm I'm pregnant." I said and he smiled before picking me up and spinning me around." that's great." he said and I smiled." we must tell mother." he said and I teleported us to his mother who was talking to Odin, Sif and the warrior three." we have something to tell you." I said and they all looked at us." she's with child my child." thor said and wrapped his arms around me from behind." congratulations." Sif said and hugged me." yes congratulations." Odin said and everyone hugged me. then I saw Loki." congratulations." he almost growled." thanks." I said and he looked at me." may I speak to you in private." he asked and spirit appeared and hissed at him." I promise no tricks." he said and for some reason I trusted him. we walked onto the balcony." why can't you just love me." he asked." because I love-" I felt something sharp in my stomach. I looked down and saw his dagger inside me." you wonder why I don't love you." I said and fell on the floor. the door slammed shut and he locked it. I heard thor trying to get through shouting to me but I couldn't answer." I'm the god of mischief and lies you should know better." he said with a sickening grin." oh be quiet thor by the time you get through she and the baby will both be dead just give up." Loki shouted.

Thor's pov
she stood on the balcony talking to Loki when he shoved a dagger in her stomach. I started banging on the door and I could hear her breathing slow down. after his little warning he disappeared. I kicked the door using all my strength an it burst open she was still alive thank god. I shot lightning at her remembering she uses electricity to heal. it stopped and she stood up after yanking the dagger out of her stomach." god he's an arse." she said and I hugged her." I love you." I said and she hugged back." the baby's okay spirit checked." she said and I smiled." don't ever trust Loki." sif said and hugged her.

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Comments

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.