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thor's girl.

a date?

He sat next to me and I smiled." Wanna go on a date." He asked." A date?" I asked." Yes me and you." He said." Id love to." I said and he smiled." When." I asked." Tonight." He said." Where?" I asked." I may be a prince but I can cook." He said." You're a prince." I said." Yes of asgard." He said." Wow." I said." So how bout it me and you tonight." He asked." Sure." I said and he smiled." So where will this date be?" I asked." On my floor." He said." Okay then." I said and the elevator doors opened." Guys I don't know what you're doing but we got a problem with tony." Nat shouted." We're talking what's wrong with Tony." I asked." Come see for yourself." She said and we went to the main floor to see tony drunk and dancing on the table." What the hell." I said and Thor hugged me." Ah my good friend Thalia and the one who took her from me." Tony said walking over to me." You never had me." I said." I was close." He said." Actually you weren't." I said." But he had to come along and take her two years and he took her in one day." He said." Okay tony you're drunk go to sleep or get some coffee. I'm not the only girl out there. There are plenty women who would kill for you I never really felt that way." I said and he smiled." Why being drunk is fun you don't have problems." He said and pulled me away from Thor." I will break you in ways you could never imagine." I growled and he left go." Could've just asked." He said and walked away. Thor came over to me and wrapped his arms around me." Are you okay." He asked." Fine." I said. I was lying. My arm was scarred with small marks self harmed marks. Tony just happened to catch a couple. Blood trickled down my arm but I hid it. Thor was cooking for our date and I went to my floor and bandaged my arm. I got changed into a black dress. Lord help me. I platted my hair and went to thor's floor." You look lovely." He said. He was wearing a tux and omg he was fit." You too." I said and he lead me to a small table. After dinner we walked to the balcony and looks at the stars." You are absolutely gorgeous." He said and I looked at him." You look so handsome in your suit." I said and he smiled. We sat there talking about things and then he walked me to the elevator." Goodnight lady Thalia." He said." Goodnight Thor." I said and he hugged me." I know you can do better than that." I said and he smiled before pulling me into a long good night kiss." I think I'm in love." He said." Me too." I said and got in the elevator. I went to my room and went to sleep." Miss Maxwell Nat said to wake you for training." Jarvis said. I sat up and got changed into joggers and a tank top. I put my ankle boots on and walked to the elevator." Jarvis take me to Nat." I said and the doors opened to a gym floor." Okay me against you right now." She said so we hopped into the ring." Go." Steve shouted. She jumped at me so I ducked behind her and grabbed a pressure point. She fell to the floor unconscious." Thalia wins." Steve shouted. The elevator opened and Thor and Clint left it." Who killed Nat." Clint shouted." She's unconscious I used a pressure point." I said and Thor wrapped his arms around me." Next up Thor and tony." Steve Said.I kissed Thor and he walked into the ring." Go!" Clint shouted. Tony punched Thor in the face and broke his nose. Ten minutes later they left the ring Thor won but cam out with cuts and bruises all over his face." Come here ill heal you." I said and healed him." There all better." I said and he kissed me.

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Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.