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thor's girl.

stop!

I pulled away and he was smiling. Tony grabbed Thor and threw his across the room." Tony what the hell." I shouted and ran to Thor but before I could get there tony picked him up again." Stop!" I shouted as they started fighting. I pushed tony off Thor and stood in front of him. But tony wasn't looking at me and Thor he just hit me in his suit. I flew across the room and crashed into the wall. I tried pushing my self up but failed." Thalia!" Thor shouted and ran to my side." Don't move you've cut your head." He said and tony ran next to me." I'm so sorry." He said." I cant feel my legs." I said and Thor picked me up gently. I was taken to the medical bay and fell unconscious.

thor's pov
she was hit and sent flying across the room. She crashed into the wall and cut her head." Thalia!" I shouted. This girl who I knew from the moment I saw her I would marry her. She was desperately trying to stand up but she couldn't. I ran to her side." Don't move you've cut your head." I said and tony ran next to her." I'm so sorry" he said I could hit him. I picked her up and slowly carried her to the medical bay. I looked at her and she wasn't awake." Please Thalia open your eyes." I said and they fluttered open. I placed her on the bed and started to leave the room." Thor please stay with me." She almost cried. I looked at her and tears wear streaming down her face." I wont I promise I'll stay by your side." I said and pulled a chair next to her." Why did you step in front of me." I asked." I didnt want you getting hurt." She said." I could take it. I am a god." I said." I know but seeing you in pain hurt me." She said." I love you Thalia." I said." I love you Thor." She said." Never stand I front of me again." I said." I can take it I'm a survivor." She said. The door opened and Bruce walked in." Thor please leave the room." He said. I stood up but felt a faint grip on my arm." No please let him stay." She said. I sat back down and Bruce put her on this gas that made her fall asleep and sewed her head up." Is she okay." Nat asked entering the room." No If she makes it through the night its a miracle." Bruce said. A tear ran down my cheek I can't lose her I've only just met her." Thor maybe you should have a minute." Nat said." I promised her I would leave her side." I said and she nodded." I know you love her but there's a good chance she wont make it." Nat said." I can't lose her." I said and she hugged me before sitting next to Thalia." Thor I'm so sorry." Tony said." I could kill you right now but I wont leave her side." I said. I heard a long beeping sound and I looked at Thalia." S-she's dead." Bruce said and checked her pulse." No please Thalia open your eyes." I said and dropped my hammer." Lets give him a minute." Nat said and they all left the room." No no no Thalia I'm begging you please open you eyes. You're such a beautiful girl i need you please wake up." I cried. I leaned forward and kissed her. Her lips were cold unlike their normal fiery warmth. I pulled away and tears ran down my cheeks. My head hung and i cried.

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Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.