The Agent's Daughter*****FINISHED***** - Comments

it's Coulson… And each sentence should begin with a new paragraph. Ex:

"Can you see anything that might shut this off?" Fury asked, the both of us.

"Well if there's any tampering. It's not from this end." I said.

"This end?" Fury asked, sounding concerned.

"Yeah, well the Tesseract's a portal. It's a portal to the other end of space. Door's open from both sides." Clint added and I nodded.

"Doctor, it's spiking again."

AND THE STORY IS OVER!!!!!!

I AM GLAD IF YOU ENJOYED THIS STORY

@MistressLoki1618
Yeah, that was the reaction I was aiming for, and the reaction that I recieved the most. And I know, I felt bad for putting Maddy in a coma, but there is a very good reason for it though...

At first I was like WHAT? SHE IS DEAD? but being in a coma is almost just as bad. :(

@Marvel is my life.
Aweeh thanks. I didnt mean to almost kill you :)
I'm glad you're liking the story so far :D

Oh my god. You almost killed me.
Your writing is so good I almost died.
Think about it.

@Marvel is my life.
Hahaha :)
You want me to pick her fate? ;)
I think you're going to be pretty surprised at her fate ;)

NONONONONONONONONO SHE CAN'T DIE.
THEY'RE IN LOVE, DAMMIT.
I'm sorry. You story just makes me feel so much.
This is lovely.
But I don't want to pick her fate. SURPRISESSSSSS

@Marvel is my life.
Aw thanks! That means alot :)

This is a great story so far!