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-_- do you even realize how many times I've reread this simply because I couldn't possibly go a moment longer without it??? Pleeeeeaaaaase update your freakin story, or else I'll sic Captain America on you!!! Oh wait...

Gah!! PLEASE please please more! This is so good!

Thor demands entrance?! Who the hell does he think he is? Some sort of god.... Oh yeah, that's right. Duh.

Anyway, great story and I'm can't wait to read more soon. Keep up the great work.

Omg please update this is such a good story eeeeekkkk!!!!!!!! Please please please update I can't wait any longer. I need to know

Ugh....what a way to leave it hanging! And it was just getting to the good part!

Fantastic, as usual. The erotic passages are really steamy and visceral. Please continue, I'll take one installment per month if I must! ;) I need to know if they seal the deal, or if Steve finds out about the dare and facepalm miscommunications & hurt feelings ensue! (My biggest fear at this point.)

I think I just fell in love with this story even more if that was possible. Just picturing captain America watching Torchwood makes my inner fan girl squeal with delight. Cant wait for more and good luck on your masters :)

I love this. Its light hearted humor is exactly what I was looking for to counterbalance the deep dramatic stuff from my literature classes. Cant wait to read me

Great story

Now that I've thrown a bucket of ice water over myself and have changed my underpants (three times) I feel better able to leave an intelligible review.

Actually, no. I am faaa-reeaaaking oooout at this chapter. Did Darcy really just say dat out loud? GTFO awesomeballs! I also enjoyed the way that you painted Darcy's relationship with Thor and Steve's relationship with Thor. The dynamic just makes sense, and it should provide some amusing stuff down the road as Darcy and Steve's romance evolves.

I love your writing style because it runs smoothly, effortlessly across my brain, like its own movie.

Askjasdksjdalg!

That was my original response to pretty much everything, but I've taken a breather and can now form proper sentences once again. This whole chapter was an emotional rollercoaster, but a good one. It was funny, sexy, sensual, awkward, Darcy's moment of mixed disappointment/anger...it was absolutely perfect! I'm not even sure which part to address first. I loved Darcy's little meltdown in the elevator and afterwards, because who would be able to stay composed after hugging Cap? Her dream was obviously sexy but there were also feels, and I had no idea that Personality Types could be sexy. None whatsoever.

The ending though, the ending! First off, a massage is always good. Always. A Cap massage? I am proud of Darcy for only voicing her thoughts and not actually jumping on the guy; it seems she does have some restraint after all! I always love awkward Steve too, because it's so adorable and always makes me go "Aww!" without fail. This time was no exception. I just love this story so much, and it keeps getting better and better!

My favorite line? "Vulcan mind-melded by Loki." I don't know why, but I could not stop laughing. My mom stuck her head into my room to ask if I was choking; that's how bad the laughter was. I love it! Thanks again for another extraordinary chapter :)

@squiddlybunny

I'm Loving it!!!! I also love the length of your chapters!! =D And I need to read more xD

@DevilishxAngel
Thank you!! :-) Hope you enjoy the next chapter!!

OMG I'm Loving this story!! I can't wait until you update =D

@TheIronBat
Goodness! Thank you so much for the extravagant praise! :-) I've been pleasantly surprised by the reaction this story has gotten so far. Believe me when I say, I LOVE writing this (as slow of a process as that is, alas). And having such great reviews to look forward to, just makes the writing that much more fun. Thank you!!

Oh, and thanks for the Clint/Darcy recommendation. I started reading - sooooooo much fun. Love the Loki addition - I can see how Darcy and Loki could possibly be friends. And I wasn't sure about Clint and Darcy...but dare I say: yum. LOL

@Starfleet Dropout
Thank you so much! Your review made me grin from ear to ear. I'm really happy to know that you're enjoying this fic - it's a blast to write, I can assure you!!

Disappoint? This chapter was so absolutely amazing that I read the entire thing while literally bouncing in my seat. I almost fell and still managed to keep reading :)

The way you portray Steve is just so right. I've read stories where he's the ultimate good guy and sometimes it's a little annoying because no one is that perfect, but you make it so that he is a good guy but he still has his doubts, fears, uncertainties, etc. He's also extremely adorable and awkward, and I just love it. The movie scene cracked me up, because Darcy would pull the yawn move on Steve. I might have whooped when she did and then aww'd when Steve did the whole knee-pat-stay thing. The last sentence is my favorite though. "Darcy was up to something." Oh yeah, Steve's got beauty and brains! This story is just so much fun and tickles me to death. (Maybe literally if I actually fall over next time lol)

Oh! My favorite Clint/Darcy story, for now, is Simple, Not Easy. It's got lots of Clint and Darcy, protective Avengers, and Loki feels.

@squiddlybunny Then we are even ; )

Chapter 2 review: This story is crack. I squealed like a damn little girl when I saw you had updated.You're turning me into a crackhead, gurlfran. I'm completely in love with Captain America/Darcy. I used to read some Darcy/Loki, but I could never get into it unless it was humorous, one-night-stand/accidental-type hijinks. I just can't see those two together in any serious capacity. This pairing, on the other hand, blows my little mind. To quote Donovan, Superman and Green Lantern ain't got nothing on you.