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Save Me From Myself

The Angel of Death

Save Me
Angel of Darkness
Prologue
No One POV *punch* -grunt- "WHY DID YOU FAIL YOUR MISSION YET AGAIN?!" A big burly man asked her. "If I had gone through with the mission I would have been listening to your commands. That would count as submission. I take orders from no one." She told him calmly. It's all for Bruce. If they think I'm more of value they won't go for him. I have to protect him. *slap* "PAY ATTENTION TO ME YOU BITCH! I OWN YOU NOW AND YOU WILL DO AS I SAY!" He screamed at her. He was getting tired of the 16 year old's games. Maybe I should have taken her brother instead. "If you think taking my brother would have been better, you’re as wrong as your mom was in raising you. My brother is just as stubborn as I am -lie- and you would regret it all the way to hell and back -truth-. "Oh really, and why is that?" he asked with a slight nervousness in his eyes. "Because I would hunt all of you down and kill you in the ways you fear the most." she said. They can't know my secret; no one can ever know my secret.
*Flashback* "Mommy I don't want to do this anymore, you said we were going to play a game."
"This is the game dear. Now nobody likes a whiner so suck it up."
"But it hurts when we play this game mommy it hu-" *slap!*
"I SAID SUCK IT UP! Babe? Start the machine."
"AAAHHHHH!"
*End Flashback* Back to No One's POV The girl made her decision then. She looked up at the men with a dark sadistic smile.
"I'm done playing with you." The men stared at her in shock as she started glowing. She stood up from the chair she was meant to be tied to and unfurled her wings. "Death is your penalty."
The men's screams echoed throughout the halls, alerting others of the danger. Men rushed to the room and opened the door. The sight was horrifying. Some men were strung up, others slaughtered, and all of them suffered different deaths. Their eyes came upon the man beating the girl and could barely look. His face was frozen in a silent scream. His eyes, nose, and ears were bleeding. His eyes were burnt out of his face and his heart has been ripped clean out of his chest. The men searched for the girl but all that was left was a singed mark on the wall in the shape of a girl with wings.

Notes

The bold and italicized words are other peoples thoughts. The things that are only italicized are Lykos's thoughts. I deleted the first version and rewrote it so I hope y'all like it. Please comment and rate. I would love some feedback on this if you can. If you would like to be in this story, leave a profile in the comments. I will read them and use some in my story. Tell me you characters Name, Gender, Age, If they have a mutation what is it, their appearance, and how they would fit into the story. If you do leave a profile, feel free to go as in depth as you want. Bye churros, I hope you enjoy!

Comments

@Aurora Masquerade

Awesome! and thanks! You can ask any questions you want about the character anytime! lol

Maximum_Ride Maximum_Ride
3/24/15

@Maximum_Ride
Dude! Your character sounds amazing. If I have any questions for you I will definitely ask okay? I like for people to have as much say in their character as I do. Thank you so much! I love to hear what people think. I will update as soon as I can.

Maximum (Maxi) Rider. 16 years old. Female. Brown hair with red streaks. Werewolf/Siren.
Excaped from Itex a group in HYDRA. Dates the Winter Soldier. Helps keep him stable. Loves kids.Babysitts.She helps on missions and is Tony's favorite. She likes to party,dance,drink,and sing. Is depressed. Has started to cut. Goes crazy on Full Moon's. She usually sings Darkside by Kelly Clarkson and She Wolf and Hips Don't Lie by Shkirra when drunk or when ever. Has nightmares because of the test HYDRA did on her. She starts to drown her self in alcohol when two of the kids she Babysitts get murdered right in front of her because she would not tell HYDRA where the Avengers are.
( I hope that my decription is not to much. Her theme song when she is drunk is Chandiliers by Sia. )
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!PLEASE UPDATE!!!! :D

Maximum_Ride Maximum_Ride
3/22/15

@Liberty49
I would be happy to.


@Aurora Masquerade
I understand I've moved many times no pressure when you do have time maybe you could check out my story. I just wanna know what you think:)

Liberty49 Liberty49
12/20/14