Okay so I added a few new characters, they are not based off of anyone really. They are going to play a big role in this story so tell me if you like them. Here is their profile, I don’t go too much into detail.
Sven a.k.a. Snake
Relative:
Age: 22
Family: Mercer
Friends: Terry. Arty. Jensin. Reran.
Occupation: He is one of the best fighters of his group. He also knows Greek, Irish, Spanish, French, some Latin, and rough Japanese (he is learning).
Appearance:
Hair: Dark Brown. It is down his shoulders.
Eyes: He has heterochromia. His left eye is a bright, almost crystal blue. His right eye is a dull blue almost grey color.
Height: 6’1”
Clothes: His signature look is a red bandana on his head and his favorite shoes, bright red high-tops. When he is not wearing his high-tops, he is wearing studded black combat boots. He always wears the bandana out (unless he is meeting with his crazy boss).
His Story:
Sven was abandoned at the age of 3 to Mercer (more in the story). Mercer was a mercenary for hire –see what I did there? -. Mercer raised him to fight and made sure he knew multiple languages, was extremely smart, and knew how to fight extremely well. At the age of 14, a 15 year old Jensin came to live with him. At the age of 17 he became a part of the group he is in now. He doesn’t like to hurt people but he will if they are dangerous or potentially deadly. His nickname is snake because he is quick, quiet, and dangerous.
Terry a.k.a. Badger
Relative:
Age: 26
Family: Arty (his little brother)
Friends: Sven. Jensin. Reran. Arty.
Occupation: He is the strategist. He is the person that scopes out buildings to find cameras and takes care of the most guards. He is not exceptionally smart but is extremely clever. He knows Russian and Spanish.
Appearance:
Hair: Platinum Blond. Short-ish. He often has it spiked up. Has a natural brown strip in his hair
Eyes: He has light brown eyes. They have bits of grey and black in them.
Height: 6’2’’
Clothes: He normally wears a black vest over a white long sleeved cotton shirt. He also normally wears black jeans tucked into combat boots. His signature thing is a scar running along his collarbone.
His Story:
He lived with his parents and siblings until he was 16. He was at home with Arty when the rest of his family got into a car accident. A drunk driver rammed into their family and pushed them off of a bridge, and then he drove off too. His family died immediately. He and Arty were put into care and turned into trouble makers. When Arty got caught hacking at 15, Terry and Arty were offered a position in a group (Terry only got offered the position because he was Arty’s legal guardian). He got the nickname Badger because of his hair and temper.
Arty a.k.a. Dopey/ Codebreaker
Relative:
Age: 20
Family: Terry
Friends: Sven. Jensin. Reran. Terry.
Occupation: He is the team’s hacker. He only knows enough combat to defend himself and run. He knows Japanese, Russian, Greek, Spanish, French, German, Irish, Portuguese, and Latin.
Appearance:
Hair: He has shaggy dirty blond hair. It goes down to his shoulders and is very well kempt. Arty really cares for his hair. He also has a dark brown strip running through his hair.
Eyes: They are a bright green with yellow and orange flecks.
Height: 6’4”
Clothes: He has lip and nose piercings. Lip is a ring and nose is a stud. He normally always wears black skinny jeans, blue etnies, a blue t-shirt, and a black hoodie. His signature is the chain and paracord bracelets he wears.
Life Story:
His parents died when he was ten. As soon as Terry was old enough, he got a job and became his legal guardian. When he was 12, he started hacking. At 16, he got caught hacking into a secure space. Men came to arrest him but offered him and Terry a job or go to jail. He chose the job. He has two nicknames because one, Dopey, is for just him and the group. When he is called Codebreaker, it is when he is working with another group. He got Codebreaker because he is a hacker. Dopey is because he is a klutz and is well dopey. Most things go over his head, though he is extremely smart.
Jensin a.k.a. Chameleon
Relative:
Age: 23
Family: Deceased
Friends: Sven. Reran. Terry. Arty
Occupation: He is the face. He is the person that goes undercover in missions. He is also good with combat. He is the person that gets on the inside. He knows Spanish and French.
Appearance:
Hair: He has light brown hair. It goes to his ears. His hair is often slicked back to look nice and business like. He also does this to look older to go with his disguises.
Eyes: He has dark green eyes with blue and light green flecks.
Height: 5’8”
Clothes: He often wears suits to look like a very professional businessman. His signature is a bright blue tie. When he isn’t wearing a suit, he wears jeans and a t-shirt.
Life Story:
His mother died at birth and his father was never found. He was adopted by a nice fake couple that raised him into his life now. When he was 15, his fake parents left him with Mercer and he lived there until he and Sven joined the group. Sven was 17 and he was 18. He got the name Chameleon because of how he will blend in with a crowd. He can make a great disguise for almost everything.
Reran a.k.a.
Relative:
Age: 28
Family: Unknown
Friends: Sven. Terry. Arty. Jensin.
Occupation: The leader of the group. He is a jack of all trades. He is a good fighter, hacker, strategist, and can blend in. He is definitely the brains behind the operation. He knows how to keep a cool head and be a kind and strong leader.
Appearance:
Hair: He has black hair that is in a military regulation cut.
Eyes: He has dark brown eyes with green and blue specks in them.
Height: 6’3”
Clothes: Normally wears a brown shirt tucked into camouflage pants that are tucked into brown combat boots. When he is meant to look like a regular civilian he wears dark faded jeans, a button up shirt, and nice shoes.
Life Story:
He was in the military for years before he got the offer for this job. He was a Sergeant Major in the Marine Corps. He doesn’t really share his life with people. He cares for the people on his team very much and leads them well.

Notes

So here is the deal, I don't have a name for Reran's team, or Reran's code name. Help me please! I for the life of me cannot figure out a cool team name or a good code name. Everyone's code name fits with their personality, appearance, and part in the team. Please I have a Code Red. Anyone that can help please do so. I love you guys and I will upload a new chapter either today or tomorrow. I have to finish it first. I am half way through and then I must proofread it all. Do you guys like a lot of short chapters or a lot of long chapters? I don't know if I should keep my chapters around 500 words or if I should have it up in the 2000. Please comment and vote. I want to know what people think. I am going to keep doing the profile thing in the first chapter for a while. I love you pancakes. Have a good life and I hope you enjoy my story that hasn't completely started yet. Bye!!!!