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thor's girl.

the past part two.

Loki's pov
I asked if she wanted to get coffee and we ended up talking. She was so beautiful. I leaned forward and kissed her. Oh how I've dreamt of this kiss. Her sweet lips against mine. She pulled away and smiled." You're a great kisser." She whispered." Everytime I see you together you're about to kiss." Steve said." You're abit late for that." I said and Thalia giggled. Her long blue hair was pulled into a tight pony tail and she wore shorts and a tank top. Oh how I wish I could tear the material from her fragile frame." Luke I better go train goodbye." She said and kissed me on the cheek. Right then she said something that shocked me." Loki i know its you my prince." She whispered and my eyes widened." How can you tell." I asked and she smiled." The way you kissed me." She said and walked away." You know stark loves that girl he wont be happy when he knows you got her." Steve said.

Thalia's pov.
Our lips met in perfect harmony and when I pulled away I looked at him." Luke I better go train goodbye." I said and kissed him on the cheek." Loki I know its you my prince." I whispered and his eyes widened." How can you tell ." He asked." The way you kissed." I said and left. Okay mental note no bad Thalia no Loki. I walked into the training room and it was empty so I plugged my headphones in and started punching a bag." But I've got thick skin and elastic heart......" I sang along with the music in my head. I jumped up and kicked the bag and it flew into the already cracked wall cracking it more." Holy fuck." Some one shouted and I turned to see Bruce." And I thought my anger issues were bad." He finished." I don't have anger issues." I lied of course I do." Thalia I know you have I can tell I have them clearly its easy to tell when you have them." He said." It gets hard Bruce there are times I just want to kill anyone." I said and sat down." Hey hey I have my head fills with the voices of people I killed." He said." I just cant control it." I said and he looked at the cracked wall and exploded punching bag." I think you and the hulk are evenly matched." He said. Tears fell down my cheeks." I never tell anyone this Bruce no one knows this." I said before turning the cameras and microphones off." Before shield brought me in I had an anger attack an a bunch of people died their screams stick in my head and haunt my drew." I said and he put his arm around me." People look at me and think indestructible its wrong I have a weakness and its grows stronger ever time I sleep. I stay awake at nights crying." I said and he hugged me tighter." I know how it feels." He said." But I'm the agent the ultimate weapon." I said and went to my room crying. I found a small razor and drew a picture on my arm." Thalia are you okay." Someone asked." Yeah go away." I shouted and the door opened Loki came in and I threw the blade in the bin." Come here." He said and hugged me." Why have you got blood on you." He asked." Training kicked the bag off the hooks and a bit of rock fell on me and cut me." Where I can heal." He asked." Its fine Loki." I said and he looked me in the eyes." You're lying what happened." He asked." I'm fine." I said and he sat next to me on the arm I just attacked." Thalia what the hell." He asked looking at it." I scraped it on something." I said and he looked at me." Don't lie to me Thalia." He said. There was a knock on the door and Loki turned invisible." Who is it." I asked." Its Bruce are you alone in there." He asked." Yeah." I said and let him in." I heard another voice." He said." Phone call I had it on speaker." I said and felt a tingling in my arm. I looked down and saw a green mist surrounding it." Oh well I was just coming to say. I've been through it all and I know how you feel things get better." He said." Okay I may go to sleep goodbye Bruce." I said an she left." If I see you with marks on your arm again I wont be happy." He said." Why do you care so much. I'm a mutant nothing more."

Loki's pov
" Why do you care so much I'm a mutant nothing more." She said." Thalia I love you that's why I care and you're not a mutant you're special." He said." I'm an outcast I don't belong here Loki." She cried. Finding those marks on her arm was like a slap in the face. Why was she doing it what had she said to Bruce. Why does he know how she feels what has she done. She looked at me with a tear stained face and my heart ached knowing id she was on asgard she'd be happy

Thalia's pov.
I'm an outcast I don't belong here Loki." I cried. He wrapped his arms around me and kissed the top of my head." You'd better go." I said an she frowned and left. He went to kiss me but I shook my head. I made a cloud and tried to sleep but the terrorized screams plagued my mind. I woke up screaming. I couldn't breath and Loki came through the door." Thalia are you okay." He asked. The cloud lowered me to the floor and i ran out of my room. Come on don't be a wimp jump. The voice laughed. I reached the edge of the deck and looked at the city below me." Thalia no!" Loki shouted running across the deck but wind blew me off." Loki I feel more alive now than I ever did." I said telepathically to him. I felt to arms wrap around me and the green mist and I was back on the deck." You dick I don't wanna be here." I cried and he frowned. After that I moved back to my apartment and they called me if there were any problems but Loki wiped my memory of me seeing him at all. I started running to train and that's when I met Thor.

( present tense.)
We lay in bed trying to sleep and some how it did get better the voices stopped altogether." Thalia wake up." He said nudging me." I'm already awake." I said and he picked me up." I cant believe we're getting married." He said and I smiled. Did I regret it not at all I love Thor." When is the wedding."I asked." That's up to mother ." He said and I smiled. We got up and our armour attached to us." Oh wow you look good." He said and hugged me." Moonlight." I said and the flower opened. I tickled the petals and it laughed. I gave it a drink and me and Thor went for a walk." I love you're staff." He said looking at the dragon tooth." My queen you are approaching the dragon's village." Spirit said he'd been around alot." There's a dragon village." I asked and he nodded and lead us to it." Hello." I shouted and they all bowed." Our queen." They said." You may stand." I said and they stood up and looked at Thor." Leave the queen." One dragon growled about to attack him." Its okay he's my soon to be husband do not attack him." I said and stood in front of him." As you wish." They said." Your cave is over there." One said and pointed to a cave in a mountain type thing." I have a cave." I asked and spirit laughed." Of course you also have a dragon form." He said." How do I change into it." I asked and spirit told Thor to step back." Get angry." Spirit said and I turned into a large black dragon." This is awesome."I said. And turned human again. We went to my cave with had a large nest and it actually had treasure in it. I'm kidding. Thor hugged me and I kissed him.

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Comments

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.