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thor's girl.

goddamn.

We decided to head home because it was getting late and Thor smiled when I offered to fly him back because i wanted to practice my dragon form and he was amazed by it. I landed in the field and scared some training asgardians. I felt a pain in my leg and I looked down to see a spear in it. I turned into my human form and fell to the floor." Thalia what happened." Thor asked and pulled the spear from my leg. I screamed in pain and my sister ran to my side." Thor what happened." She asked." Fucking hell." I said and tried to heal it. Thor scooped me up and ran to the infirmary with me. He placed me on a bed and I passed out from the loss of blood.

Thor's pov.
she flew me back to the tower and placed me down before turning human and she had a spear in her leg." Thalia what happened." I asked and pulled the spear from her leg. She screamed and sif ran next to me." Thor what happened." She asked." Fucking hell." Thalia said and tried healing her self but couldn't. I picked her up and ended up covered in her blood before I placed her on a bed in the infirmary. I saw her pass out and I nearly cried. Nurses came in and sewed up her leg. The door opened and frigga walked in." What happened." She asked rushing next to me." She was in her dragon form and someone threw a spear at her." I nearly cried." Okay I'm going to heal her and she's going to be okay." She said and placed her hand on Thalia's leg. The cut slowly vanished and her eyes opened." Thor." She whispered." I'm right here sweetie." I said and she gently took my hand." I love you Thor." She said and I smiled." I love you too." I said and she sat up." Hello queen frigga." She said and mother smiled." Hello dear Thalia." Mother replied. I knew my mother was fond of her she was the daughter she always wanted and now I was to marry her it would make her so happy." So when is the wedding." I asked and mother smiled." We decided on tomorrow." She said and I helped Thalia up.

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Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Why did it submit it so many times?!!! I'm sorry it did that, I don't know how to delete them...

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweaking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.

Not trying to be mean or anything, but it's kind of confusing to read when they are all talking in the same sentence. The quotation marks are also confusing too. I mean it's a good story and all, but it just needs a few tweeking, that's all.